This Could Take All Day

I’m still playing around with this one. Not sure which version (if either) I like best. I might keep one or both or scrap the whole thing. At the moment, I prefer the first, just slightly. I might look at it later and hate it. Since I have other things I need to do today (and nothing else to post), I’m going to leave them both here for now.

WHY AWAKE (1)

why awake
entranced
forsake
enjoined
now twice
enticed
forlorn

wide aware
torn soul
repair
offset
not once
confronts
unworn

while away
ward off
dismay
behold
new love
above
reborn

WHY AWAKE (2)

why awake
entranced
forsake
enjoined
now twice
enticed
forlorn

wide aware
torn soul
repair
offset
not once
confronts
forget

while away
ward off
dismay
behold
new love
above
consoled

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